Alienware a Scam?
Lead type: Twist
Lead:
Alienware, the greatest of all computer companies extolled by all review sites. The best in CPU and GPU combinations built for optimum performance and aesthetic appeal. This company is the most famous of all graphic computer companies with the best reputation. However this is not true. Alienware was once those many things but is now below average. The former company, now owned by Dell, is seen as a incompetent company who’s computers are considered by some as heaven or by others as hell.
Thesis:
Alienware the once great company is now considered by most as overpriced for the computers you get with bad customer service and many hardware problems.
Lead type: Description
Lead:
Alienware, owned by Dell, is considered by most as a pathetic excuse of what was once a marvelous company. The computers produced by Dell’s Alienware are aesthetically appealing with the sleek designs and flashy lights. These computers are considered by many as overpriced for the performance you get when compared to other companies such as HP. these computers encounter many hardware problems which are not solved due to poor customer service.
Thesis:
Therefore, Alienware the once great company is now considered by most as overpriced for the computers you get with bad customer service and many hardware problems.
Lead type: Question
Lead:
How could one take a once marvelous company and turn it into a incompetent pathetic excuse for a graphic gaming PCs? The once almighty Alienware brand has fallen on the chain of computer companies after being bought by Dell. This company is now lowered its standards for products and refuses to help those who pay for a thousand dollar computer.
Thesis:
Alienware the once great company is now considered by most as overpriced for the computers you get with bad customer service and many hardware problems.
Lead:
Alienware, the greatest of all computer companies extolled by all review sites. The best in CPU and GPU combinations built for optimum performance and aesthetic appeal. This company is the most famous of all graphic computer companies with the best reputation. However this is not true. Alienware was once those many things but is now below average. The former company, now owned by Dell, is seen as a incompetent company who’s computers are considered by some as heaven or by others as hell.
Thesis:
Alienware the once great company is now considered by most as overpriced for the computers you get with bad customer service and many hardware problems.
Lead type: Description
Lead:
Alienware, owned by Dell, is considered by most as a pathetic excuse of what was once a marvelous company. The computers produced by Dell’s Alienware are aesthetically appealing with the sleek designs and flashy lights. These computers are considered by many as overpriced for the performance you get when compared to other companies such as HP. these computers encounter many hardware problems which are not solved due to poor customer service.
Thesis:
Therefore, Alienware the once great company is now considered by most as overpriced for the computers you get with bad customer service and many hardware problems.
Lead type: Question
Lead:
How could one take a once marvelous company and turn it into a incompetent pathetic excuse for a graphic gaming PCs? The once almighty Alienware brand has fallen on the chain of computer companies after being bought by Dell. This company is now lowered its standards for products and refuses to help those who pay for a thousand dollar computer.
Thesis:
Alienware the once great company is now considered by most as overpriced for the computers you get with bad customer service and many hardware problems.
by: Speed Racer
Well I guess so, I mean the current leader(not for gaming), is Apple, so I really do not see Alienware going back up again.
ReplyDeleteAll the lead types make sense in how you describe how alienware is a scam
ReplyDeleteI like the twist.
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The twist would make me want to read it more
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I liked the question lead because you take a strong side to the argument.
ReplyDeleteI like the the last one because it makes me most want to read it.
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